Friday, 3 August 2012

Argumentative Essays about Joseph Kony!!

썸네일Joseph Kony is the guy who kidnapped children in Uganda to make them soldiers even though they are so young> He gives the children a gun and teaches how to kill people. People in Uganda are crying and trying to catch Joseph Kony.  However, Joseph Kony just says that he didn’t kidnap children and he loves peace.  I agree with the use of the video that made by Jason Russell who found the existence of Joseph Kony and try to catch him and help the children in Uganda by showing what Joseph Kony has done and what people have to do for help children and guard them.  Now I will tell three reasons why I agree with this topic.

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First, because making the video about Kony’s work will help to capture Joseph Kony by making his face and work famous, many people will be able to know about him and try to help Ugandans to catch him together. Truly, by making this video millions of people saw that video and then began to support exercise which tries to capture him Joseph Kony can be found in a shorter time.


썸네일Furthermore, we have to make him famous before Kony kidnaps more children. When Kony knows that millions of people on the world know what he has done, he will be ore careful, and people will be able to capture him too! Lots of people are coming to Uganda and helping them not to be kidnapped anymore.
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Finally, because we have to rescue children who are in the awful army. They are scared and they need our help. They are waiting for us. We have to catch Joseph Kony, so we have to release children who left their parents. And to catch Joseph Kony we need many people to gather many people we have to make a video so to make Joseph Kony famous.

People who disagree to make Joseph Kony famous said that only people who has done great works can be famous, but making Joseph Kony is really important. Because when people didn’t saw the video about Joseph Kony, they will not able to know him. And didn’t care about him and Ugandans! By making him famous, we realized what we have to do and help Ugandans. Also, people who try to help Ugandans appeared USA armies came to Uganda so make Joseph Kony to catch easily.

In conclusion to make children get out of the terrible army. And punish Joseph Kony people have to use a video by making Joseph Kony famous. People should spread the video of Joseph Kony and find Joseph Kony. Because it’s the only way that can today help the children, so I hope the children to rescue.
URL::::::::::::::::http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jPPQUISv-eM (where you can see the video)

5 comments:

  1. Sorry it was my fault that the size of words are too small, I wil be more careful about that part..

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  2. Good job. Next time,please use a larger font. The essay is well-thought out and organized. Keep up the great work!

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